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Silence SLASHED by ~OmgItsChey:iconOmgItsChey:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


Silence slashed.

Excruciating Explosions.

Beheading Bangs.

Worrying and Weathering.

Wandering and Wilting.

Melting and Mocking.

Swelling and Slithering.

Halos and Hangings.

Horns and Hollows.

Faces of people.

Locations of places.

Pumping of blood.

Deaths of millions.

And then...

There was nothing.
©2008 ~OmgItsChey
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I'm sorry about my burst of devitations. You probably can't keep up. I probably have like, 4 more that I want to upload, but I'll do that when all my watcher's have caught up with me.. lol.

I don't know what this is.
I don't know what type of poem this is.
I don't know why I did it.

:(
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~susan-storm:iconsusan-storm: Jul 4, 2008, 2:24:45 AM
I don't care why you did it, I'm just glad you did! Very visual, I love it. It also has a singsong quality to it that is very pleasing, all in all an excellent poem! Any place inspire you to write this? Like, Vietnam, Iraq . . . I would be interested to know.

Ms. B
~OmgItsChey:iconOmgItsChey: Jul 4, 2008, 2:36:45 PM
Thanks :) I thought it was pretty visual too. It wasn't really a place like Iraq or Vietnam... I've been thinking about my childhood a lot. I guess I compared it to a war inside my head.

--
How much is that Sasuke in the Window?
The one with the mad wicked stare.
How much is that Sasuke in the window?
I hope this Uchiha\'s for sale. :D - Uncle Yo.
~susan-storm:iconsusan-storm: Jul 10, 2008, 12:58:15 AM
A war you are winning my dear, and don't you ever forget that. :)
~jeannie64:iconjeannie64: Jul 10, 2008, 11:50:29 AM
wow ! its great i love powerful words excellent work xxj:hug::)

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes very little to upset the balance

lifes a bitch but only if you let it be so <img src="http://www.the-n.com/media/quiz/badges/candyheart_quiz/loveya.gif" border="0" /><
~OmgItsChey:iconOmgItsChey: Jul 10, 2008, 6:45:16 PM
Thank you so much :] And thank you for the favorite.

--
How much is that Sasuke in the Window?
The one with the mad wicked stare.
How much is that Sasuke in the window?
I hope this Uchiha\'s for sale. :D - Uncle Yo.
~jeannie64:iconjeannie64: Aug 20, 2008, 12:39:29 PM
ah hon your welcome xxj:hug::)

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes very little to upset the balance

lifes a bitch but only if you let it be so <img src="http://www.the-n.com/media/quiz/badges/candyheart_quiz/loveya.gif" border="0" /><
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